My friends? they lie D: I suck at poetry.

As promised today i am sharing my murdered odes. D:
They're really quite brutal. If you read this I'd really appreciate some feed back...sooo..Love you?

Music
You save me
Everyday
You bring me up
When I am down
You spin me round
When I'm on the ground
The sadness that you sing
The freedom that you bring
Is better
Than chocolate

Hope you bring
To those who are down
An outlet
Is what we need
Out souls are gone
And you have been for so long
You bring them back
So we don't lack

Let my eyes run
With fear
And hate
Heal me
Save me
From all
That is
To come


Cloudy days
You seem
So very far away
You hide the sun
To protect my eyes
Ease my head aches
And sooth my pride

You bring rain
Tears from the sky
That bring life
And beauty
To the sky
You give us that smell
That we all enjoy
And that freshness
We all lust for

Please come back
And save me again
From the world
Where i can't fend


Spring time
Joyous bliss
Invites us in
The sun shines down
On the place we found
Sun shild reign
Has come to begin
Blonde hair
Blue eyes
Look up
To the sky
For inspiration

Blue as the sea
That we swim in
White as the sand
That we lay in
What you may ask
Could be better than this?
Only the fast
That we could see the fish

Then night time comes
Oh blackened sky
Brings sleep
To our tired eyes
Stars shine bright
Above our heads
And we fall asleep
On the beach

If you have any suggestions about anything you ever read that I've written please comment
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